Thursday, April 18, 2013

Feelings: abstract noun poem


Quiet is midnight black silence unbroken by the border of light.

Boredom is foggy gray awakening nothing.

Success is cloud white tuxedo going to the wedding.

Loneliness is bark brown biting away at my hope.

Love is rose petal pink hearts fluttering around your head.

Happiness is grass green berries feeding the mind with joys.

Sadness is ocean blue waves thrashing away at the shore of your heart.

Warnings are caution tape yellow clues studying your senses.

Fears are old bark gray trees that never stop growing.

Awkwardness is stop sign red feelings flooding the air.

2 comments:

  1. Good use of alliteration. Like the awkwardness as stop sign imagery

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  2. I really like it! The best I think are the warning one and success. Good job!

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